Unreality

I have this sense, of unreality
It hides the love in front of me
I'm not sure how to say or see
The feelings left inside of me.
Truth is what I show to all
and hope to save them from the fall.
Sadly I'm too blind to see
The failures held in front of me.
The wretched taste upon my skin
Shows the colors, that hide within
-My heart that bleeds to fade my soul
And heeds to shine and make me whole.
Tears of joy, pain, and hate
Never seem to come my way
Emotionless, and stiff, I lay
Distant tears always fade.
I'm stuck inside, unreality
And sometimes I just fail to see
Everything, I need to be.
Rarely in this life of mine
Peace is truly what I find.

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[Angel's Lady]

I'm stuck inside, unreality
And sometimes I just fail to see
Everything, I need to be.
Rarely in this life of mine
Peace is truly what I find.

What a melancholy feeling this settled over me...
How poetically written, though, and very sweetly so.
Sometimes life is just damned perfectly imperfect that the ice in your veins burns from the inside....
Good job. Great write.