Sacrifice

Art: Leo's House 2 by J.Planet

Sacrifice

 

My power is accentuated

By my creativity

And joy in life

Intuition controls

My Conscious thoughts

Passion to express

Rules my Subconscious

I’ve worked hard

To learn balance

So I can bring

Peace to my heart

Pride in Self requires

That I behave honestly

No matter what anyone thinks

Emotional cleansing 

Surrounds me

I fear the Change I long for

Although I accept

Change is Inevitable

Time to drag that

Tiger of dissatisfaction

Up the hill

To be sacrificed

For the Good 

Of the All

Blessed be

Reviews

[Einstein Noodle]

man...i really like this one ..it is so easily read as a prayer ... recognition of intuition, passion and wisdom to seek a balance is fantastic ...i find your second verse particularly strong and inspiring .. there is substance to this poem ..read it twice just to get the juice ;)
E.
ps wow of a pic!

[Drowning In Reality]

Thank you so much. You are always so kind. I am glad you liked. The pic is from a friend of mine. Nearly all are. She is wonderfully talented. I am blessed that she shares her work with me.

[Annette Pisano-Higley]

Great imagery, metaphor and word use. The narrator is strong in their purpose and beliefs. Love "drag that tiger "of dissatisfaction up the hill. I know that tiger well! Well done!

[Drowning In Reality]

Thank you for your kind words.