Man with a mask

Man with a mask

A Poem by Itwasonceuponatime
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The madness got you to?

"
A single tear slides his face, 
As his mask is finally thrown away.

His knees hit the floor as he cannot take it,
Take it, no more!

He screams, he crys, yet he does not hear a sound,
For he is alone, alone in a world of his own.

A single tear is wiped away,
As the mask must be replaced.

Someone is at the door, searching,
Searching for the man, the man with a mask.

© 2016 Itwasonceuponatime


Author's Note

Itwasonceuponatime
Please ignore grammar, english is not my mother tonge.
Any comment is appreciated.

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Great job expressing the feelings...I can feel the loneliness, great write!

Posted 8 Years Ago


The emotion is very strong and well done!

Posted 8 Years Ago



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Added on February 11, 2016
Last Updated on February 11, 2016
Tags: mask, fake life, emotions, life

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Itwasonceuponatime
Itwasonceuponatime

Osijek, Osijecko-Baranjska, Croatia



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