holding on

When you hold on

to a dream that is broken

with your thoughts

saying it is not so

as the beatings rain down

from your heaven

as common sense

begins to grow

though the haze

of the pain

you are given

is it so hard

to sleep alone

Reviews

[dontwakeme]

Love, "the beating rain down from your heavens."

[...]

. indeed ...
. beautifully expressed ... moving and heartbreaking poetry ...