waiting

Have you waited long

with your dreams

to belong

with someone

who will help you

carry on

have you waited long

for the sun to arrive

on a life

that can begin

to grow

 

Reviews

[ChemicalMadness]

I do quite enjoy the simplicity of your lines, though reading through your work, most is quite short and generally what I'd call a bit "preachy"...more of an observation than a criticism, really. I'd like to see a bit of diversity, a I believe your style would meld well across a wealth of topics. Overall, you effectively communicate your points quite clearly.

CM.

[~*~Peace Keeper~*~]

I think everyone wants someone that will be there with them and believe in them and their dreams. I think we all wait from time to time for someone like this. I like how short it is and yet how descriptive it is.

Great Job