Her Eyes

You just need to look closely...

Hide the pain within

the smile and the, “oh, I’m fine”.

Her eyes say it all.

Reviews

[David Scott]

We all do this. Sometimes for selfish reasons. At other times, more like the feel here, true love fir another.
The eyes tell much.

[Doreen]

Yes, they certainly do. Thank you for reading.

[New Dawn]

yes - the mouth can lie but the eyes never do, lovely write capturing so much

[Doreen]

Quite true. Thank you for reading. :)

[Relic]

Eyes are the window to the soul as they say. You said so much in only a few short lines. There are probably a million stories with the same eyes you describe. Great writing.

[Doreen]

Yes they are, aren't they? Thank you.

[Relic]

My pleasure.

[marlayesterday]

So much can be said with so little, and you did it. Very well put.

[Hidden Happiness]

sometimes something so short can say something so big and so beautiful....nothing else to say...just amazing:):):):).

[Michael X]

behind locked eyes, the pain remains but the outward appearance masks
the mistakes in the form of a heart broken and regret, such is life when
depression consumes the mind, it's often a cycle that will never know
change until it's too late, you have an excellent way with wording Doreen ^_^

[An owl on the moon]

Would that we could all go beyond the shallows of life and look more deeply at our families... friends... and just those walking by... These three lines could change the world.