Sweet Agony
A Poem by
Doreen
For the Sugar and Pain contest
T aste fruitionO f sugary sand meltingO n my tongue, delicatelyT easing my senses.H eavenly, sweet surrender,A tender bite ofC onfectionery bliss.H ellE xplodes inside my head
© 2012 Doreen
Author's Note
A pain that tastes so good.
Reviews
LOL! the pain of toothache indeed haha - I loved the irony of the acrostic word and then the lines ha - nice!
Posted 13 Years Ago
It's a sad choice huh? do I give up my sweets, or do I give up my teeth? fun play here
Posted 13 Years Ago
It's a sad choice huh? do I give up my sweets, or do I give up my teeth? fun play here
LOL! Acrostic! You don't see too many of these. Bravo! This is great.
Posted 13 Years Ago
LOL! Acrostic! You don't see too many of these. Bravo! This is great.
perfect penned pain
Posted 13 Years Ago
perfect penned pain
Oh do I know this well...
Sugar and spice and everything
nice = hell on enamel...
Posted 13 Years Ago
Oh do I know this well...
Sugar and spice and everything
nice = hell on enamel...
Sweet Agony indeed. Oh how the bliss turns a poor diabetic into a blob on the er table. If only I could have candy....
Great write.
Matthew
Posted 13 Years Ago
Sweet Agony indeed. Oh how the bliss turns a poor diabetic into a blob on the er table. If only I could have candy....
Great write.
Matthew
Oh my word, thats absolutly an amazing poem!!! Amazing format!!
Posted 13 Years Ago
Oh my word, thats absolutly an amazing poem!!! Amazing format!!
A very good acrostic. I enjoyed.
Posted 13 Years Ago
A very good acrostic. I enjoyed.
I think that was awesome. It was an excellent contrast between the short term gratification of candy and the future excruciating price to be paid. I thoroughly enjoyed.
Posted 13 Years Ago
I think that was awesome. It was an excellent contrast between the short term gratification of candy and the future excruciating price to be paid. I thoroughly enjoyed.
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Added on April 15, 2011
Last Updated on January 15, 2012
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Doreen NJ (no, we don't say Joisey)
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I’m a writer, a reader, a dreamer, head in the clouds, feet off the ground. I love dragons and wizards, potions and hobbits. Aquarius by nature, and a bit wacky at times. I write poetry and sho..
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