I Like

I Like

A Poem by Doreen
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(The photo is my creation)

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I like to put my toes in a cold stream on a hot day

and watch the icy water re-direct itself to accept me. 


I like how it feels to wiggle my toes as I grimace in pleasure, sucking air through my teeth, then shiver and giggle out loud.

 

I like the memory of climbing onto the roof as a child to watch the sun rise, feeling like the only person alive at 5:30 in the morning.  


I like the nostalgic feeling I get when I wake to see the horizon in a blaze of burnt sienna and move to a dusty gold then gentian blue. 


I like a fresh cup of apple cider on a fall day when the leaves are in bold, beautiful shades of amber, lemon, and crimson.  


I like the feeling of my cheeks being chilled by nipping air, of being just warm enough in a favorite, thick, soft sweatshirt.


I like the way the air smells of moss and clean soil

after a summer rain.  


I like the feeling of humidity that dances over my skin before a cool breeze gently blows making goose-bumps stand on my arms.


I like the quiet hush as it snows at night, the glinting of light off the flakes making it look like magic.  


I like the way it compresses under my feet when I walk on it, making a sound like giants eating cereal.  

© 2015 Doreen


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A lot of great "feelings" in this piece of delightful work. I enjoyed the read. I like the photo as well. F.

Posted 3 Years Ago


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The simple joys of life
In the smallest of things

Spiritual :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


Doreen

9 Years Ago

Thank you. :)
I've never really experienced any of these thing that was described in the poem, but the words you used were so vivid and realistic that I felt I experienced all of these things in my living room right now.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Doreen

9 Years Ago

I'm glad I was able to bring that forth. That was my intention. Thank you for reading.
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I like this much my Doreen

Posted 9 Years Ago


Doreen

9 Years Ago

I'm glad you dropped in and let me know.
I like the mind within this...

Posted 9 Years Ago


Doreen

9 Years Ago

Thank you for stopping by.
Chris

9 Years Ago

Was worth pausing and letting the coffee get chill
well I like most all these things too except getting on the roof at 5.30 I love a sunset but not that much
unless you have a tar beach just out the window

Posted 10 Years Ago



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Doreen
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