Eyes

Eyes

A Poem by drivebypoet
"

I have looked for kindred spirits my whole life

"

 

                           Eyes

   Is there a fire behind those ebony windows

   or merely the coldness of innuendoes

   and is there a hearth to warm my soul

   or merely a reminder that I am growing old

   and is there a loveseat for weary feelings

   or merely a dream that cannot be. 

 

© 2010 drivebypoet


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nicely penned

Posted 14 Years Ago


What a gentle flow of words wrapped in six lines of a question .. to call eyes ebony windows is a beautiful touch ..

Posted 14 Years Ago


Lovely thoughts.

Posted 14 Years Ago


and is there a loveseat for weary feelings
or merely a dream that cannot be.
-beautiful!

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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drivebypoet

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