What I Wouldn't Give

A heartbroken person who'd give anything just to have that person, their one, back in their life again.

What I wouldn't give to be in your arms again,

To feel the comfort of their embrace.

What I wouldn't give to hear 'I love you' whispered,

Into my ear from your lips.

I'd give just about anything to have that again,

Even if only for a single moment

 

 

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Reviews

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Tabitha M. Davis,

Packed full of emotion and sadness...

Reminded me of some sad movie I saw once, I felt for your soul. Some of us would give anything. I know things happen for reasons yet to be seen.

There is one grammerical mistake (their) your poem is talking about a person, then second stanza you switch to their maybe should be (your).

Wanting to be back in a persons arms makes for good poetry.

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