Fine China
A Poem by goldenscar__
I see you. it is always -always- a pleasure to see you my heart aches, my flowers wither I still see you and like a fine china I am not allowed to touch you
May or September It's time to surrender
© 2019 goldenscar__
Author's Note
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Hiii, m baack
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Reviews
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very lovely piece. This poem runs very smoothly and you created vivid images.
I like the way you emphasized the word "always".
Thank you for sharing :)
Posted 5 Years Ago
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5 Years Ago
Hello @Leviari,
I'm so happy to know that you liked it..
thank you for reading & welc.. read moreHello @Leviari,
I'm so happy to know that you liked it..
thank you for reading & welcome
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Added on May 3, 2019
Last Updated on May 3, 2019
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goldenscar__
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I write things
I feel things
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