My daughter

I have a daughter
she is tiring me
she has the most beautiful voice
and a very unique sense of romance

My munchkin is a good baker
she makes good strawberry pies to everyone
till sunrise

Her smile is a bliss
she drowns me with her sweetness
and I love her so much

I have a daughter
she is tiring me
I don't deserve her

Reviews

[Einstein Noodle]

nice sentimental straight forward poem ..it has kind of a senryu quality about it ... anyone who has raised children know the energy drain it can require ... and there is hidden deep wisdom in your poem says i ...we love them as close to unconditionally as we can ... i am going to guess your daughter feels pretty blessed to have such love and support in her home ;) i am a single dad that raised 2 daughters and 2 sons ... and no one will ever convince me that boys are more difficult to raise ... nooooooooo not by a long shot :) love the read Golden! of course it brings my own children to mind ... all grown and on their own now ... with kids of their own
E.

[goldenscar__]

Boys or girls, they're part of our souls. And parenthood is the best feeling to be experienced... This comment shows how deep you love your childrem and how proud you are. May god bless humanity.
Hello E, thank you for reading.

[Einstein Noodle]

[wordman]

they say our children are our crowns

[goldenscar__]

that is so true Ron.....

[wordman]

you`re welcome,,have her make me a pie

[goldenscar__]

Of course.. which flavour would you like ?

[wordman]

chocolate,fudge

[goldenscar__]

OK then....

[wordman]

call me when it`s ready,i`ll come and get it

[goldenscar__]

deal..........:)))

[wordman]

deal..........................