All of you

This poem is dedicated to you
to the half-talk that you can't say
to the playlist you are ashamed to share
to the person you become when you close your room's door
to the fights you're having in your mind
to the world you're ruling in your imagination
to the reality which you're dreaming of
to you curves

to your dark places

to your worries
to your flawless imperfection
to your wounded soul
and skinned heart
this poem is dedicated to the other side of you
to who you really are
raw and original
strong and beautiful
...to your elixir

I don't know if it's going to be alright,
but stay strong!

Reviews

[wordman]

and i hope this blessing will fall upon his soul

[goldenscar__]

Amen...:))

[Chris Shaw]

This will appeal to many, because we all have our struggles, our imperfections and the other negative things which can eat away at us. The side of us we don't want people to see. Thank you for your words.

Chris

[goldenscar__]

I think that the person we hide is who we really are.. people want us to omit that person and reshape another version that matches with their criteria.. that's just sad.
you're welcome. Thank you for reading

[George David Hope]

Really liked this. Everyone has struggles that they keep hidden but always try to stay strong and hide it from the world outside. It's only once we are back behind a closed door that we can relax. Thanks for sharing

[goldenscar__]

you're welcome.
and always keep fighting

[Onlyme]

Wonderful motivational poem. To help others in their hours of needs. As it shows you do understand and you do care. As we are all alike in so many ways. And feel the same emotions.

[goldenscar__]

I hope this poem helps making someone smile and feel that they're not alone.

[Onlyme]

Iam sure it will sweetheart. That is called caring.

[goldenscar__]

Thank you dear

[Onlyme]

your very welcome.