You

You have a thousand-year look

You make me feel alive

Beauty speaks through thee

Smile to me more

I love you

Reviews

[Julie McCarthy (juliesp..]

short and sweet, beautiful thanks for entering my latest competition, good luck

[goldenscar__]

Hi @Juliespenhere, thank you. =)

[Chris Shaw]

How uplifting to read these lines of love. Brevity at its best. I love you too for posting this little gem

Chrus

[goldenscar__]

and I love you for cheering me up, every time

[Einstein Noodle]

ohhhhhhhhhh i knew you were talking about me in the first line .. and i says to meself .. man ... i really am old! ;) but such a wonderful surprise .. you love me!!!!!!!! :)))))))))))))
seriously now .. i think this is a nugget goldenscar .. so straight forward using simple language the put together as you have ... speaks volumes .. depth and feeling .. well done ... no wonder we are given a heads up to "watch" you ;) i'm subscribing and will try to do just that
E.
ps. love your about me! such a chuckle!

[goldenscar__]

Omg what are you even doing here? I have signed up in writerscafe to write about my feelings that I can't express to you. I got exposed not, happy? this is so embarrassing!!!!!!!! shhhhh I need time to think

[Einstein Noodle]

ahahahahaha ... the secret's out ;}

[goldenscar__]

hahahahha ='(

[Laurent Hardesty]

"Smile to me more" had a good effect. Had to read it a couple of times to get your flow though. Defiantly a fan of shorter poems myself

[goldenscar__]

Thank you, I careless about rhyming, it's just me and words

[Onlyme]

Beyond timeless, love undying and true. A delightful piece that makes your heart sing.

[goldenscar__]

thank you sweetheart, it's good to hear from you

[Onlyme]

Bless you Hugs.

[wordman]

sounds eternal,bet he loves you to

[goldenscar__]

he made me feel that way, that's enough for me
thank you for reading

[wordman]

always a pleasure

[Amanda Trerotola]

Made me think... Passionate!

[goldenscar__]

Glad you liked it. Thank you for reading..