Hidden Vulnerability

expression and pain.

Gentle beauty, graceful and slow.

She'll glide past you, Eyes closed.

Over there, in self expression.

She dreams of paadise;

meanwhile enchanting her every audience.

 

If one looks carefully,

you may just see it,

her proof of vulnerability.

A tear falling gently,

in agnizing, hidden pain.   

 

her movements are strong.

Positive, an aura of grace; beauty.

But her eyes,

Hidden by the mask of art,

where none can see.

Author's Note

Written March 8, 2012.
Something I dream of being able to do. Expressing myself in advaced Figure skating. thanks for reading.:)

Reviews

[Eagle Cruagh]

She dreams of paadise;

I love your poem, very expressive, imagry
creative and clever.
"She dreams of paradise", Ah, you should help me
write my island stories--- islands of paradise, islands
of desire and others.
This poem is excellent, very expressive and passionate.
Thank you,
----- John

[Teardrop]

This is so pretty!

[Katrina Mckeown]

beautifull.

[Coyote Poetry]

We allow few to really see us. Hard to open doors to weakness and pain. I enjoyed the desire and the reason for the poem. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Poe Redd]

Oh mai goodness! Figure skating! Wow! Well, that's just beautifull.. Like you.