Help Her

Poem. That's all. Umm, A grl who's judged a lot.

She never imagined,

 Things would be like this.

A confused decision,

led to the wrong life.

 

She's caught

In her own trap.

Sinkhole in a pit.

Left alone to sink.

 

She's sending

silent screams of help.

But they scorn instead.

or do hey not hear?

 

I see someone lost,

in need of loving help.

But will she take it?

Can she be too far gone?

Author's Note

Started out about a chic I know, ended in its own thing. Written 1/27/12
thanks for reading and reviewing. :)

Reviews

[highthought]

She's sending

silent screams of help
because she doesn't have true friends around , life is different when they are around, and how hard it is to find a friend who doesn't search for his own interest of his friendship with u? you tell me

[John Jackson (El Juero)]

Life is all about the choices we make every day. Unfortunately, sometimes choice get made for us. Sometimes it's all a battle, and you are right, some folks get too far gone.
Great piece!

[Poe Redd]

Love this, especially the last two lines. The dreaded wrong decision in life, mwa ha ha. Whoever this is, I'm sure she will realises it was not the wrong decision. Good will come of it yet.

[Rose of Gondor]

There's that thin thread between who you are, what you could be, and every possibility inbetween. Once that thread snaps, there's no going back. It's like the point of no return, really. Wonderful poem, easy to relate to.

[Coyote Poetry]

Some places in a life. After we cross a certain line. We become smarter and will never return to who we were. Could be a good thing also. I like the questions raised by this poem. A strong ending to a excellent poem.
Coyote