Taking the Chance

Taking the Chance

A Poem by dreaming dame

Effort given,

satisfaction.

 

Chances taken,

without care.

 

A hurting heart,

Why would he care!

 

No matter,

'tis the past.

still the hurt's to last.

© 2011 dreaming dame


Author's Note

dreaming dame
this is an older piece. Just thought I'd post something new. :)Thanks

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I like it.
Wish it was longer though...

Posted 12 Years Ago


Realy good. its short but amazing.
:)

Posted 12 Years Ago


Why would he care!
Why does it always have to be the guys that don't care?? WHY??? It's always like that! Guess that's life eh? So very true!

Posted 12 Years Ago


And, ooh, would i know how that feels. (I will find you.) Very nice, short but effective.

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Added on December 18, 2011
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dreaming dame
dreaming dame

Southern Ontario, Canada



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I'm 18 now, finally the age I dreamed of being as a kid lol. Life has shown that lessons can be taught in a very difficult way.. but I believe in finding the little things of beauty in everyday life.. more..

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