He?

Confusion

He can't break my heart

if he never had it.

Can he?

 

 

Being alluring, mysterious,

he set a trap.

Did he?

 

 

Being him, he said

he didn't care

does he?

Author's Note

This is my heart up there. So be gentle, but un-failingly honest. :) Thank you.

Reviews

[DontBlink158]

Wow, its short but packed with emotion. I really loved it and I love love the first stanza. It's great, keep on writing!

[paradise]

very small and short poem but had such strong words and questions that seem to never be answered only throughout time great job once again

[Irfan Bashir Shah]

The depth is unfathomable to the trained eye...... Excellent!

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Terrific poem, widomatic questions...perfect...

[Me]

excellent poem.

[Thea]

Wow...A very straight-forward piece...Few words but it means so much! Well done! Such a brilliant write!
:)))

[Coyote Poetry]

A very good poem. The questions of love or not been the question for thousand of years. I like each set of lines. Each with a new question needing a answer. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Amila Jay]

A really good write:-)