No Cares

I asked if I should,

He told me he didn't care.

I stopped and thought,

What if I would

go do, without a care.

 

HIs lack of careing attracted me.

I felt/feel pulled in his trap

that'll lead to hurt.

But he doesn't care!

How refreshing, mysteriously alluring.

Giving a want,

 

So maybe one day

I'll find a way

to not care,

and be okay.

I'l go into his trap,

and show him;

show him how I care.

 

He'll son drop his facade,

and care.

Author's Note

An argument convincing myself of something. ;) Two of you know what, and tell me what you think! :)

Reviews

[John Jackson (El Juero)]

Be careful what you wish for...
Well done poem. (spelling!)
I liked the poem, and I hope your uncaring friend drops his facade.

[Yina]

Hmmm all-star? You have a good argument:P lol

[Poe Redd]

Oh, i love that last line! It just completes it! But, doll, i don't know what you're talking about. o.o messege me! LOVE IT!

[Robbie~xoxo~]

Don't we always get lured by things we "know" are bad for us... yet, we get enticed nevertheless... Sounds like an argument you've been battling for a while. (good luck) Nice write...

A few typos... but nice.