Daggered, Again

Daggered, Again

A Poem by dreaming dame
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Sort of a physical sequel to Daggered

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 Thought I'd made it;

survived the test.

Tried to go on with life,

only to taste my blood;

feel the invasion of blade.

I'm falling.

Once again, I've been daggered.

© 2011 dreaming dame


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dreaming dame
Let me know what your thoughts are.
Thanks for reading. :)

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hmmm yes, these things tend to happen especially when we least expect it. Always keep an eye open...always look behind our back (if enough to drive u crazy). Yet keepin God as an active aspect in our lives is more than enough to keep us going. U've been "daggered' before and survived so... lets see u fight to survive again. Good work

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Yikes! Suddenly I hurt....... You're all to good at making stuff feel real:( lol
Great though! I picture that one dagger with your name on it, ya know?:)

Posted 13 Years Ago


I like how it included the title (in some form). I like the emotion of it.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Very simple but I rezally like it :D

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is a very simple yet a very strong piece. I loved it and thought that this was great.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

"Only to taste my blood; feel the invasion of blade." That's gorgeous. You're so goth through poetry. x3 Love you so much!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I like this one as well, but the original will always be my fav :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

hmmm yes, these things tend to happen especially when we least expect it. Always keep an eye open...always look behind our back (if enough to drive u crazy). Yet keepin God as an active aspect in our lives is more than enough to keep us going. U've been "daggered' before and survived so... lets see u fight to survive again. Good work

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I agree with Coyote...That's just how life goes on...This poem was really short but I gotta say that the meaning/idea was well said... :)))

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Life can have those surprise attacks. I like the short poem. In a few words create a situation and a ending. Thank you for a excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on September 20, 2011
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dreaming dame
dreaming dame

Southern Ontario, Canada



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I'm 18 now, finally the age I dreamed of being as a kid lol. Life has shown that lessons can be taught in a very difficult way.. but I believe in finding the little things of beauty in everyday life.. more..

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