Lame

I guess this is just a frustreted poem.

LONG GONE. HISTORY.

ANOTHER WISH; WHAT A STORY.

MINDLESS, HOPLESS WISHES.

ENDLESS; MY LONELY MESS.

Author's Note

This is basically talking of the inability to properly rwite down my too typical for poem and too boring for story feelings. Which recently is lonliness. So I came up with this, whatever you would call this. Give me your thoughts. I'm happy for anything you write. :)

Reviews

[Richard Anthony Goulart]

Short and beautiful. I believe that you are the best so far that i have read that can make a short short story that expresses so much emotions that it hurts the reader.

[Honourfish]

Very simple! Short and sweet and thats what makes it so good! It speaks out to me really well, everything in my past present and the dreams of the future in my mind, and none of it is worth it without companionship either from friends or loved ones. Good write!

[DontBlink158]

this was great, and very nicely wrapped up loneliness, it was a great write!!!

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Captured lonliness perfectly in my opinion, love it :)

[Yina]

Amazing how you can put soooo much feeling and meaning an everything into so little!! I love writing in this format but I've never succeeded in putting that much into it. Wonderful an not at all lame!:):)

[Poe Redd]

I continue to be shocked at the greatness of you poetry, darling. How you manage to put all that emotion into four short lines beats me. And i feel it, too. One sad, lonely story. -.-

[theopenbook]

this is not lame:) this is the truth:) so simply said:)

[AndyJCash]

I've never been a fan of this kind of format, finding it a bit shallow, but you're reasonings for doing so actually given depth to why you have chosen this structure. Also, rather than having each line as just one word, you've put more effort into it and it's quite a well penned poem. Nice job!

[Krystal Nicole]

I loved it. . I thought it was very meaningful and powerful. . Very nicely penned

[Coyote Poetry]

Without wishes and chances. We would have quite a boring life. History is a two sided coin. Can bring sadness for a time. Then they become the good days when no fear and chance was our goals. I like this poem. You said a lot in this short poem. Thank you for a outstanding poem.
Coyote