Grey Grace

A poem about a woman/girl that is suffering with the consaquences of blind love.

The grey sky

is holding every lie.

She wants to die.

 

The water is grey too;

waiting to devour something new,

watching tears fall from her eyes so blue.

 

Was she meant to jump?

to fall to her watery grave?

It seemed so, with her life so alone.

 

 A cruel wind came,

whipping her hair, calling her name,

saying,''Your death will give none the blame.''

 

Ah, but the truth she knows.

His essence is as black as the crows.

She now reaps, what he did sow.

 

Innocence lost,

at her own cost.

Life; now colder than frost.

 

But her babe calls.

Catching her; before she falls.

The Penalty of Guilt polls. 

Author's Note

Asusuall, let me know what you think. REVIEWS!!!!!
And let me know if' I should add on to this. :)

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I believe need more description. Last lines left a open door. The poem was strong in description and story till the surprise ending.
"But her babe calls.
Catching her; before she falls.
The Penalty of Guilt polls. "
I enjoyed the darkness and the desire of this outstanding poem.
Coyote

[Yina]

Wow! I'm glad her babe called on time cuz poor babe if she had jumped but those feelings in this writing are deeeep. It was really good!

[Awkward]

This sounds like something would sing! As a poem it's great as it is but if you were to make it into a song I would add on :)
Good job,

[DontBlink158]

This is really great, i felt and saw what was happening to her... I loved it very nice job. If you wanted to add on you could,but i dont think it needs anything

[Poe Redd]

This is so great! And visual. I can so see it happening. To me. At the dock. o.o *shakes self* Anyways, love it darling!