My Place

My place is one where I create my own atmosphere; a fiery storm, or a dance of smooth elegance, and everything in between.

 There's only the intoxicatingly cold smell. There's no sound but the song of my heart, and my blades cutting the ice. My Haert takes it's cue from the beat, and leads me to... 

Author's Note

I'm planning on finishing this for a contest. :)

Reviews

[Joel Adenyn]

I like it. It certainly brings some thought to thinking and imagining what you're writing. Maybe tweak a one or two things to make it flow better like,
(My place is one where I create my own atmosphere) either change "place" to home or add an , "My place, is one where I create..." and maybe take out, one. "My place is where I create..." Just some ideas. I'd like to read more when you've got it and good luck on that contest.

P.S. About your profile quote. Sorry guys are mean, but not all of us are :)

[Yina]

Hope you finish this soon my DD:)

[Just Me]

Totally love the the world you're in. I have one myself. I love strolling through it just to see what it has instore for me.

[Yina]

Oooo I totally love!! Can I join your world?!?:):)