HURT

It's true what they say;

ev'rything's not what it seems,

Falling; dying are my dreams

Hurt ALWAYS finds the way.

The way to hurt me the most,

While he sits there and boasts.

 

It has been said,

Unnoticed is the heart that's blue,

But now all hope has fled.

Oh, oh  what to do.

Author's Note

This is older, and I was really down when I wrote this.
Let me know what you think. Be honest!!!!! :)

Reviews

[Dreamer]

okay, i actually find that your last few words turn the mood of the piece from sad to funny. uhmm im not sure if this is what you were going for. I like it though because it seems to lighten the entire situation and makes it easier for the reader to evaluate whats going on and think about what they themselves would do. I like that:)

[Just Me]

This was very sad but I could feel the strength of the emotions in those few words. Nice work!

[Coyote Poetry]

A powerful poem in so few words. So much emotion hidden in the lines of the poem. Sometime the truth take us to a sad place when we learn we are alone and must find our hope again. A excellent poem. Thank you.
Coyote

[alexlessah]

it is sad but you could really feel the emotion.

[Yina]

Being honest, I can totally see him sitting there boasting even though I kinda doubt it's the same guy you were seeing but I see it none the less. Wonderful job dearest dame:)

[Tasha]

This is sad (I hope you feel better now), but you wrote it so beautifully I can't complain, I loved it.