Blue

A simple thought I thought I'd share...

Tic-tock the clock does go,

Toc-tick I sit in my woe,

Rush,rush theres stuff to do,

Unnoticed is the heart thats blue.

Author's Note

Bet you thought of a clock reading this :)

Reviews

[John Jackson (El Juero)]

Gotta fight on through...I totally understand this one.

Excellente!

[theopenbook]

simple and thoughtful:) like all poems should be:)

[MadeCheaply]

I honestly clicked it because Blue is my favorite color, I was half expecting a long poem that made no sense but instead I found this great write that was to the point and left me thinking...is my heart blue?
GREAT WRITE!!!

[Cre8tive]

Loved it completely!

[Just Me]

I totally did think of a clock as I read it!!!! How'd you know???? Are you a mind reader :P
Anyway I really liked this and I felt the sadness in it.

[DontBlink158]

Yup i thought of a clock, i liked it. Even though it was short, you could still tell what was happening though the words (at least in my head).

[Yina]

Ya I totally did! Haha you totally got me there:) ;)

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

concise and dreamy reel unfurling the real~much enjoyed!

[Coyote Poetry]

Your words are true. A busy mind and life allow the sadness to go away for awhile. You did a outstanding job using so few words. Take skills to make a point in so few words. Thank you.
Coyote