Love Lost

I felt kinda lost when I wrote this,so...:)

I don't understand,

Help me,I'm lost in this land;

Help me,I'm hurt.

I don't know where to go,

The winds of hate and hurt will always blow.

 

I'm looking for you,

I'm lost,I don't know what to do,

Oh please; please find me,

I'm cut,see,I'm bleeding.

My strength for life is leaving.

 

Look,I'm here,I'm all alone,

You're all I've ever known.

Please. Please come and fnd me;

My strength for life soon will flee.

 

You're my last hope,my omly chance,

I've been pierced by his lance,

I can feel you,you're coming closer,

I'm dying,barely alive

Only with you can I survive.

 

I trusted him,he betrayed me,

I'm weak, no longer free.

Deceit and lies are his way;

took advantage of me a stray.

 

The wind is stronger,

My strength I have no longer,

I see him in the horizon,

I reach out,starting to fall,

He shouts,giving hope by his call.

 

The wind has stopped; so's my heart,

from this pain I now must depart,

I love you and you love me.

And he from life with me did flee.

 

Together forever we are the breeze,

the breeze of gentle love upon the seas,

we fight the wind of hurt and hate,

day by day we win some more,

and soon all love will freely soar.

 

 

 

Author's Note

Give me your honest opinion.

Reviews

[Knoxxeh]

I honestly love your way u make the words flow i cant never write poetry like this mine are just things on my mind but this is great i love how you wrote it :)

[Yina]

Honest opinion? Well that's pretty close to I feel right now so I totally love it!:) Keep at it you're real good:)

[Poe Redd]

WOW. This is deeeeeeep. I love it girl! now write a whole gazillion more! I want! I want! :3