Who's the Fool

IDK You tell me:)

 

I don't,

Dream of flower petals, dancing with night,

Thanking him for being so right.

Crying "Nay, I shall stay 'till dawn's light."

        What a wondrous sight.

 

 I don't,

Escape and believe destiny is cruel,

Though I may challenge her to a duel;

Her graceful manner remains cool.

        I am the lowly fool.

 

I don't,

Believe that creature is king.

Instead I'm here to sing,

Sonnets of love, a diamond ring.

Allusion of beauty, essence that will sting.

 

I don't,

Accept that you will stay,

Long live the king! I say nay.

I'm the queen as of today.

Now your the fool with nothing to say.

Author's Note

Sooo... I personally love that last line:P:P
I suppose that has shut a certain George up for good, if he would read peotry that is..
Anyway, honesty is appreciated:) Thank you for reading and reviewing

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Where are you dreaming dame. The poem is wonderful. Almost magic.
"I don't,
Accept that you will stay,
Long live the king! I say nay.
I'm the queen as of today.
Now your the fool with nothing to say."
The ending was perfect above and thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[-Scribe in Style-]

Breaking the illusion! Indeed it is an unexpected portrayal! Nicely penned! The second half of the poem stands out to me, the final two verses.

[Sami Khalil]

"Long live the king! I say nay.

I'm the queen as of today.

Now your the fool with nothing to say. "

Long live the queen then...A splendid read and write...:)........................

[MikeV]

I loved that last line too! Great write :)

[dreaming dame]

Haha thanks:-)

[Anonymous]

George is what I was thinking ;) haha this really good! I didn't know you wrote! Keep it up

[dreaming dame]

Lol thanks. I didn't even think of him untill I finished:P
lol yes, i write poems, though it's usually cheesy or angry:P

[Yina]

Love the whole thing but I especially love the fac that 'destiny' is referred to as female!:) Somehow makes it so much more personal an cruel yet awesome, ya know?:)

[Poe Redd]

LOL! yeah if only he read poetry, aie? I love the last stanza so much. Wraps it all up nicely. Long live the Queen! :D

[dreaming dame]

And she lives on! Though that lowly servant cannot read, perhaps I shall read it too him! Lol eh?:P