Beauty Queen

A rebound sort of a poem.. lol:P

 My full lips smile

and you respond; Of course.

I lean back, revealing curves.

Those who refuse are very few;

those who survive have been less.

Skin to sooth skin now,

you smile at your conquest, naive.

A whisper,"I'm sorry.''

Last words before you lose.

Direction. Thought. Heart.

Lone tear falls as I rise,

Flawless beauty restored.

 

Before this, I was plain.

'Till my first love.

He gave beauty and radiance.

Now when left alone I rot

in bitterness and pain.

Until again I steal

the love of a man.

     Or boy.

To feel once again

satisfaction in my beauty.

 

Author's Note

I suppose the "Black Widow" thought is in here, but it is what it is. Do tell me what your thoughts are. Don't be afraid to be blunt!
Thank you:)

Reviews

[Rufus "Mr Blaque" Lacy,..]

It give me the image of a young beautiful girl who grows up to be an equally beautiful women, but is used as arm candy. Then over time accepts that perception and now can only survive from that life style.

[Rachel Landes]

Honest and true. I like it.

[Michael X]

I like this poem, the tempting way the words define hypnotic sense of appealing to or attracting someone as desire becomes the meaning of life, great job

[Yina]

Yes... Interesting indeed. Don't be offended, I can see this happen:P In a strange yet nonoffensive way:)

[Poe Redd]

Yes Private yes!! This is what I've been waiting for.. *evil grin* This is beautiful in its own shadows, a perfectly poetic piece of life displayed for us to indulge in..