I to U

Just another poem I don't like but am posting anyway

 

 

I feel your anxiety,

I'm anxious too.

I see your discomfort,

I don't know what to do.

 

I want just like her,

only you don't see it.

I've cried for a guy like you,

if only you could feel it.

Author's Note

This was written August 8, 2012. I'm quite happy now:) So don't keep the depression that is pouring in here:P Comments are welcome, thank you for reading:)

Reviews

[Chuck]

A neat expression of hidden feeling. Well done.

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very nice....there's so lightness in ur few word;s......
great job u've done here....may b u should've to continue it......
have a nice day..!!

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

You got over it...and that's a sea-change.
You are fine now, outta depression's range!

[Yina]

Message me, this is one background story I'm not sure I know about but would like to... if you don't mind? It's a deep and interesting write hon:)

[Dream Mistress]

love it :)

[Poe Redd]

Cute x3 and easy rhyming thats fun to read, with a breath of sadness..