A Hard Day’s Night

A fictional poem about death that is open to interpretation.

It took part of the night
To find the body of the girl who was afraid of heights
It was quite a sight
Some may even call it a fright

Reviews

[Betty Hermelee]

This does leave us open to interpretation... and that is so well done....Mine, is that she was drunk or high on drugs and accidentally fell off of a building.... quite a sight....but it could be a lot of other reasons too...
Best, B

[William Michael Reeves]

Well I might ... interpret this right. The girl took flight from a dizzying height. The fall wedged her body so tight it fell out of sight, but not quite, because they found it with a bit of a fight. Then the clues shed some light on that fateful night about the girl's plight. She was scared. It's there in black and white!

Billigami

[JE Falcon]

If this is a Title, great. If it's a stand-alone poem. well?

[slfisher89]

Quite intriguing; could develop into a suspense novel

[Lilac Lilies]

This is really great, to me, I think it may be about someone has been murdered by being thrown off something like a cliff or tall building at night, keep up the good work, Sam

[Relic]

I get the vibe of a girl who jumped off a bridge into the murky depths. That would be quite scary if you ask me.