We run, We walk

thoughts run from the vision of time

time escapes without knowledge of the unknown

running and walking are the same

we rush without choice

time is the chaos, leading the walkers and runners

chaos guides the unknown factors of life

Reviews

[Ashwin Thakur]

Surely short and sweet but mind stirring
It surely creates a oximoron effect that will invoke literary thoughtfullness in some people
While some will just digest it
But none the less superb.

[Yanina McKnight]

I appreciate that you took time out of your day to think about my poem, Thank You
-Yanina

[jeannemarie coulter]

thought provoking read...well penned...thank you for sharing

[Yanina McKnight]

Thank you for reading my poem Jeannemarie

[Coyote Poetry]

I agree.
"chaos guides the unknown factors of life"
I have known a lot of chaos. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Yanina McKnight]

Thank you again for your kind comments Coyote

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.