The real frown

White smile.

Hungry teeth.

Gnawing at the pain.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Your words left me with the need to want to know more. Few people show real face. A lot said in the 8 words used. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Yanina McKnight]

I ended this piece without a "real" end.
Thank you for reviewing my work
-Yanina

[Coyote Poetry]

You did and you are welcome.

[Tom McRoberts]

A very cutting piece. Consciously short, it's meaning can be seen in a glance, perhaps just like the real frown itself. I really like this, keep it up!

[Yanina McKnight]

Imagery is key to all writing, I greatly appreciate your comment, Thank You