The Feeling of Loss Drags On

The Feeling of Loss Drags On

A Poem by Doctor Deathstab

She left me alone and left me crazed.

I foolishly thought I wouldn’t be dazed.

But the haughty fall from such great heights,

And I’ll never get another kiss goodnight.

She’s an addiction now that she’s always gone.

I stay up at night and brood way past dawn.

I need to kick the habit that kicked me to the curb.

It’s been a year and I feel absurd.

 

© 2009 Doctor Deathstab


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aah the pain never leaves , ye just learn to live with it , i know the feeling so very well . tis a grand job ye have done and i know so many of us will nod in appreciation as we read your poem .

Posted 15 Years Ago


Loving this.. it does drag on doesn't it... 7 months..divorce papers signed and dried..still cannot sleep right.. sigh~great piece!

Posted 15 Years Ago



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Added on March 20, 2009

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I am a new breed of poet. I write what I feel and don't give a damn what others think. I am vulgar at times, but my thinking ability goes deeper than obscenities. (Did I spell that right?) So read bet.. more..

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