Untitled Love Interest

You distress me because I wish to caress you.
What does it take for a guy to impress you?
Your uniquness shines like a light in my eyes.
I would change for you though I hate compromise.
I despise this world and the life I live,
But I'd bite the bullet for the love you'd give.
If this is a sin then I think I've confessed.
Shoot me in the head if you think I'm obsessed.
There is more to my words than seeing you get undressed,
And you're more than diversion when I get depressed.
I just want you to know that I wish we'd connect.
You seem so delightful in every respect.

Reviews

[Anastasia Starlena]

Very beautiful piece screaming a bit on the obsessed but a little beautiful as well.. Oh what girl wouldn't want to beloved like this.

[Katherine Wyatt]

Luvin' the love... also the hidden humor...

[Jinx's Heart]

Very cute. I love poem like these--ones that show the admiration from a man's point of view. It flowed very well and was enjoyable to read. Nice work. :)