Vampire Appeal

The sky is not the same; never quite as bright

Life is upside down and can’t be set aright

Companionship is dull and only semi-real

The echoes of my ghost never will congeal

The wave that carries me is also sickening

The parallel of you and I will never meet

My hands are growing numb but still are trembling

If you were by my side I’d enjoy my misery

Reviews

[Jinx]

This is a nice poem. Short and sweet. I like it.

The sky is not the same; never quite as bright
Life is upside down and can't be set aright
Companionship is dull and only semi-real
The echoes of my ghost never will congeal
The wave that carries me is also sickening
The parallel of you and I will never meet
My hands are growing numb but still are trembling
If you were by my side I'd enjoy my misery

In the second line, aright kind of made me stumble a bit. Perhaps "upright"?

Third line, semi-real is okay, but IMHO, "surreal" might work better, though it seems you're going for the syllables.

I love the last line. It's a perfect end to the poem. =)

[Bexers]

I'd agree with what Jinx has said.
I really like this poem too!

[Mercury Mirrors]

O wow villain uve outdone yourself.
My fave lines?

"The parallel of you and I will never meet
My hands are growing numb but still are trembling"

LOVED IT! Im faving it.