Bittersweet Cripple Loss: Gloom Patrol

Sunlight is dull and the sky is always grey

Inside my skull I lost the will to pray

You should’ve come home with me when I asked you to stay

Wrapped your arms around me and kept the fear at bay

My death is prolonged, kept in stasis

I’m haunted by all the lovely faces

The disease I have goes from acute to chronic

Every girl I see can be called demonic

Possessed by longing I long to drop

It would be a blessing if my heart should stop

I prayed to God for a quick solution

But I’ve not seen divine execution

My elocution comes from the way I think

I speak insanity but don’t need a shrink

I just lost my faith when I lost you

I lost my life when we split in two

I’m half of half a man always in need

No one sees the wounds, but I feel them bleed

Reviews

[Ghost of Jupiter]

again...wow... loved the flow and rhythm, do you preform your pieces? If not, you should think about doing so.
Especially thought these lines to be brilliantly well put

"I prayed to God for a quick solution
But I've not seen divine execution
My elocution comes from the way I think
I speak insanity but don't need a shrink"

You have a great talent for word play in this... well done.


P.S. Please ignore the fact that I come from the "demonic" side of the sexes...lol.