My Murdered Girl

She is such a lollipop and sushi on a slab

She is the methadone I make in my mad science lab

Her lips are cherry stems attached to make a wicked grin

But her heart’s a bible that cleanses all my sin

Heaven’s just a touch away from her developed breast

I put my tongue inside her mouth and frolic as a guest

 

My murdered girl; my dream come true

I dig you up to bury you

Your time in hell is wasted youth

With tooth and nail I fight the truth

 

I think of powdered roses as I sit beside her grave

Love says I’m in the right place though law says I misbehave

Touching her releases me from the shackles of my grief

She becomes the goddess of my forbidden belief

 

My murdered girl; my dream come true

I dig you up to bury you

Your time in hell is wasted youth

With tooth and nail I fight the truth

 

Reviews

[She stole my sunshine]

Incredible. Absolutely captivating!

[Emily B]

Many modern writers appreciate the lyricism of Poe. Few accomplish similar mastery of the idea you present here.

[Mercury Mirrors]

wow I can see why everyone loves this one.
I'd love to hear it as a song because it reminds me of 'in my room - icp'
It's truly beautifully penned.

MMFCL,
Malizzious

[BrokenButterfly]

this is a very interesting work. it's beautiful and weird and... conflicting. i'm not quite sure what to think about it but you really got me thinking. i'll be reading more : )

[Ghost of Jupiter]

Nice! I really liked what your scribed...

"Her lips are cherry stems attached to make a wicked grin

But her heart's a bible that cleanses all my sin"

awesome, I knew at that point I like this piece. Will be back for more...

[Jessica M.]

This is an extremely powerful poem.
"I dig you up to bury you"
Simply beautiful.