It Mocks the Meat It Feeds On

giving something new a shot. reviews would be helpful, thanks

God

Is

Real

But

I'm

Not so sure

About you

How

Do

You

Explain

Yourself

How

Do

You

Liv e

With

Yourself

The

World

Is

Cold

Our

Hope

Is

Old

Soon

It

Will

Whither and Shrivel and Die

Then

Wolves

Will

Arrive

At

The

Darkest

Hour

And

Proceed

To

Devour

Anyone

With

The

Balls

To

Still

Be

Alive

And it will end and start over and our race will get a second chance and then that too shall pass

Burn

The

Books

And

Crush

Their

Bones

It's no wonder

You feel at home

And I am alone

Reviews

[John A Common]

The structure is very cool. A strong statement and I think at this point alot of us are waiting for the wolves.
I also really like the fact that you took a risk writing it this way and you pulled it off,great poem.

[Kaden Sylvers]

Wow. Such a powerful statement. I like the square structure.

[sheerpoetry]

I got through it to where it made sence but it was very hard but none theless very creative. The second time i read it it was a diffrent poem, it has changed, OMG it lives, Mabey the fact that the words can be interpreted in diffrent orders.