If your eyes were an ocean

If your eyes were an ocean

I'd taste the soothing breeze

Letting your salty water

Heal my broken heart and me

Forever dwelling in your embrace

As I wash upon the shore

Your sun kisses my porcelain face

I can not ask for anymore

My skin drys from your summer air

I gently close my eyes

and let your breath dry my hair

Your words to hault my cries

We'd stay together forever 

Our love never severed

If your eyes were an ocean....

Reviews

[Kachme]

this is really great! :)

[BlackRose]

I love it. That's about all there is to say. It was awesome. I love how you could just make it flow and then you leave off with an open ending. Cool.

[Preston]

made my day.

[Scene, not herd]

Nice piece! I liked the rich imagery. Keep writing!

[misha]

Great write

[ZmH]

i love this its amazing!!!!!