Broken Silence, Breaking Hearts.

Broken Silence Fills the air

Shattered egdes everywhere

Do you see her

bump bump bump

as she stomps away

I Cut my hands picking up the pieces

drip drip drip

You stand there helpless

and I hug you and kiss your hair.

Motionless you cry

into my shirt,

Not trying to pretend that is doesn't hurt </3

You can't breathe as she comes back

and turns the corner,

before you could see her

pop pop pop..... screeeeeeech

my fists were red and her face was BLUE

and I looked at YOU and said

"She Deserved It"

and his lips tasted like a broken heart

soft, tired, agressive,

and I cryed for him.

 

 

 

Author's Note

DONT MESS WITH MY FRIENDS.

Reviews

[Lunar Lightning]

Intimidating aren't you... I would be afraid of being on your bad side. I liked this poem a lot. There was plenty of emotion.

Luna

[..R.I.P..]

I'd hate to be the person to mess with one of your friends. Lol.
This is great, the first two lines are my favorite.
Lots of emotion that helps add that extra punch of awesomeness to this piece.
Great job!

[Jess.]

Wow.
So much emotion in this, and it's written really well.
I like the first two lines the most :)
But the whole thing is amazing.