Addiction

Short sweet and to the point.

Addiction

 

 

Your love is my addiction,

Sweet elixir to my soul.

Your heart, my sacred shard of light,

Through the darkness and the cold.

Your body is my poetry,

Perfect rhythm to my sight.

Your love is my addiction,

An addiction I won’t fight.

Reviews

[Imperfection]

What an exquisite beauty this is!!

Well done.

[Maxwell M.]

very visual. mentally inspiring..almost something of a love poem. i like it sir.

[ELii]

My kind of poem.

your body is my poetry,
Perfect rhythm to my sight.

What lovely imagery. thanks for sharing.

[Neha Bagla]

Its exactly what u call it...short sweet and to the point..very conveying!!

[The Musings of Mary H.]

I went through this poem so smoothly I had to read it again! Delightful!

"Your love is my addiction,

An addiction I won't fight."

Mary

[SciFiGuy]

Excellent word choice and rythym! Words like elixir and phrases like 'sacred shard of light', add a certain fantasy or mid-evil feel to it. I love the rhyme too!

[Michael V]

Pretty short, sweet, and ....POW...Yea....
Good Job.

[Alexander W. Quinn]

Short, sweet and enjoyable. Reading it almost makes it sound like the chorus to a song. :)