My Sister, My Best Friend

Seven years later,

and I’ll never forget.

No words could describe

the way I feel without you by my side.

My sister,

My best friend.

Long-gone, but never forgotten.

My heart aches for you still.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Somethings and some memories. Become a part of us dear Diana. I lost two brothers, a long time ago. I still think of them today. I believe. When we remember them. In heaven, they can feel our love and concern still. Thank you for sharing your words and thoughts dear poet.
Coyote

[Diana]

Thank you, Coyote. They are missed forever. Mine is not actually dead, but thank you. Still haunting.

[Coyote Poetry]

This is good dear Diana and you are welcome.

[JMaster1]

It's sad. I hope you have some peace
I know she wll always bein your heart

[Diana]

Thanks, JMaster1.

[KAREN]

Nicely done! My sister is my best friend, too!

[Desert Knave]

The ache here is very obvious. A nicely written and moving piece. ~Jim

[Diana]

Thank you, Jim.

[Samuel Dickens]

Ouch. I thought this was going to be a happy, uplifting poem, but it's something just as significant, though sad. You've expressed how I feel about my late brother. Of course we want to remember the happy times and how they made the world better. Indeed, your sister will never be forgotten. Very good writing.

[Diana]

Thank you, Samuel. Sorry to hear about your brother. Take care.

Diana

[Chris Shaw]

Siblings can have strong bonds. Your poem reminded me of my younger brother. Gone now for six years though missed each and everyday. Poignant poem.

Chris

[Diana]

I'm sorry about your brother, Chris. Thanks for taking the time to stop, read, and share.

[John the Baptist]

Sometimes grief doesn't subside totally after a certain period has passed. It can return later, sometimes unexpectedly. Let it be what it is; it must run its course in its own way.

[Diana]

Agreed, thank you.

[Sami Khalil]

Sad in separation, one in relation. Your feelings and memories come together in this touching poem.

[Diana]

Thank you, Sami. :)

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome Diana.

[barleygirl]

Your message is stated in a way that allows all different readers to interpret it as they may. It could mean that sisters are estranged, or that one is no longer living, or that distance has separated them. Even in the worst cases of estrangement, I would venture to say that most sisters still feel the way you express in this poem (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[Diana]

Thank you, Margie. Nice to meet you. :)

[andrew mitchell]

That is very sad but yes never forgotten. The harshness of life.

[Diana]

Amen, harsh indeed. Thank you, Andrew.