Wow... this one is quite a write.. simple and elegant.. We try to hang on to things that were never ours... We fight over money, religions, things that we will leave behind when we get the sweet kiss of time. We came here with nothing, we will leave here carrying nothing :)
Wow... this one is quite a write.. simple and elegant.. We try to hang on to things that were never ours... We fight over money, religions, things that we will leave behind when we get the sweet kiss of time. We came here with nothing, we will leave here carrying nothing :)
This speaks volumes on the human condition. We come to this world with nothing, then when we have it or possess it, we become afraid to lose it as if we will not have another one or make another. So true. Then we won't take any to the grave but faith, deeds and legacies...Excellent...:)..............
nothing wrong with being a mere human...too many people are afraid of that....afraid of being mere humans...and how can we really lose something we have never had?
sometimes we berate ourselves for losing what we don't have...but we can only do so much and attain so much...and be grateful for what we do have.
like the words, here, Diana..
jacob
Posted 10 Years Ago
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10 Years Ago
Thank you, Jacob. Bit of a hodgepodge mess...
10 Years Ago
we all search for that elusive something....like poets, we search for that one great write that we c.. read morewe all search for that elusive something....like poets, we search for that one great write that we can say, wow, i wrote this and it will stand up to time...but alas...it is a dream, and we are mere human poets just doing the best we can.