Mere Human

Mere Human

A Poem by Diana

I'm afraid of losing
something I've never had.
No, not at all.

I'm afraid of losing something
I've never had.
Oh, isn't it sad?

I am a mere human.

© 2014 Diana


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Wow... this one is quite a write.. simple and elegant.. We try to hang on to things that were never ours... We fight over money, religions, things that we will leave behind when we get the sweet kiss of time. We came here with nothing, we will leave here carrying nothing :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Diana

9 Years Ago

Thank you. Yes, very much so.
TheLostMind

9 Years Ago

You are welcome :)



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Wow... this one is quite a write.. simple and elegant.. We try to hang on to things that were never ours... We fight over money, religions, things that we will leave behind when we get the sweet kiss of time. We came here with nothing, we will leave here carrying nothing :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Diana

9 Years Ago

Thank you. Yes, very much so.
TheLostMind

9 Years Ago

You are welcome :)
"I'm afraid of losing something
I've never had."

This speaks volumes on the human condition. We come to this world with nothing, then when we have it or possess it, we become afraid to lose it as if we will not have another one or make another. So true. Then we won't take any to the grave but faith, deeds and legacies...Excellent...:)..............

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Diana

9 Years Ago

I appreciate your appreciation. Thank you.
Sami Khalil

9 Years Ago

You are welcome...:)....................
A mere gentle and loving human. Add to that talent...:)................

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wow. I love your writes literally. Brevity at its best...:)................

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Diana

9 Years Ago

Thank you, Sami, for all 3 posts.
Sami Khalil

9 Years Ago

You are welcome...:)......................
nothing wrong with being a mere human...too many people are afraid of that....afraid of being mere humans...and how can we really lose something we have never had?

sometimes we berate ourselves for losing what we don't have...but we can only do so much and attain so much...and be grateful for what we do have.

like the words, here, Diana..

jacob

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Diana

10 Years Ago

Thank you, Jacob. Bit of a hodgepodge mess...
jacob erin-cilberto

10 Years Ago

we all search for that elusive something....like poets, we search for that one great write that we c.. read more

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