So, go on then.

So, go on then.

Go on then.

Marry her.

Reviews

[jzadski]

It's great how much nine words and three lines can say. I opened this thinking, "wow, a short post, I'm quite interested," and was able to gain so much more out of it. Got me thinking about past experiences and how many different ways someone can perceive this from their point of view, and got me wondering how you (the writer) are intending to express yourself about it. Great work, one of my favorites I've read today. :)

[Diana]

Thank you. Glad you got something out of reading it...

[Terpsichore]

What if she says no? That's sometimes the fear.

T

[Diana]

Lol. Not in this case. Could be in other situations...

[Lyn Anderson]

This is very simple, but very wonderful. To the point.

[Diana]

Thank you so much.

[Sami Khalil]

Short but says a lot and a lot. Resignation to the fact, a challenge to move on and a form of disapproval. Excellent as always...:)..................

[Diana]

Thank you so much, Sami. Good to see you around...

[Sami Khalil]

Same here. You are welcome...:)........

[Blogger]

Nicely done. I love it simply and to the point.

[Diana]

Thank you.

[Desert Knave]

I like it. Could be from the point of view of a jilted lover, a disapproving parent ... really leaves much up to the reader. Nicely done. ~Jim

[Diana]

Thank you.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

resigning to how it is, but with heartbeat much slower than it was.

[Diana]

Thank you, Jacob.

[willweb]

Sad Diana. Kind of explains the abyss of meaninglessness. Hoping this is all fiction and not as painful as it seems.

[Diana]

Sadly, this isn't the worst of it. This is the only part I can talk about. Thanks for your comments, though. You've cheered me up a little bit.

[willweb]

I can imagine Diana. I know you don't know me, but I do feel for you. Ever since your previous poem I knew something was wrong. Happy I cheered you up a little.