A Memory from a Dream

"You were like a memory from a dream that I once had,"

she says, she says.

As she climbs out of the water,

but she can't breathe the air.

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i had the same thought as Lydi...a mermaid...
someone so mythical and magical...but when she breathes the air that we have polluted with our hate, pollution etc.
no wonder she can't...breathe this air...
oh if only we could submerge ourselves and live in her world.

[Diana]

You captured the essence of it in your post. Thank you, Jacob.

[Frieda P]

Sounds like a stifling dream, more like a nightmare of a past relationship....an intriguing little ditty.

[Diana]

I think that's part of it, too. Thank you, Frieda. Wonderful insight.

[Sami Khalil]

Wow. I love this write...Bravo.......

[Diana]

Thank you, Sami. That's high praise coming from you.

[Sami Khalil]

My pleasure. Ant time....:).....

[Lydia Shutter]

Intriguing to say the least.....perhaps a mermaid? When you can't determine if a memory is real or if it was always just a dream, there is a magical aura around the memory. Not sure, but it is enchanting. Lydi**

[Diana]

I was thinking of a mermaid, as well. Thank you, Lydi.