Lol .. this piece makes me chuckle indeed. You just jotted down the gratified feelings of your hearts into the words. Umm .. you can write some more on it if you`d want to .. this could be a sexy piece if you write some more pulling the legs of lovers. Good to read!
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10 Years Ago
Yeah, I see what you're saying. It does have a certain tension.
Lol .. this piece makes me chuckle indeed. You just jotted down the gratified feelings of your hearts into the words. Umm .. you can write some more on it if you`d want to .. this could be a sexy piece if you write some more pulling the legs of lovers. Good to read!
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10 Years Ago
Yeah, I see what you're saying. It does have a certain tension.
Boys tend to congregate as do the girls. There are exceptions of course but not until those hormones course through their systems do they leave the pack and friendship usually isn't what they are looking for.
I don't believe it... Alot of girls and boys are really close friends, maybe closer than girls who are friends with girls or boys with boys. If that makes sense.
This poem makes me sad. Because all most all of my friends that where girls really weren't friends. I wasn't there friend. I've regretted the way those relationships went about. I only have a few friends that are girls now, but we arn't close really at all.
Good poem, even though I sort of hate it. It just tells me how I've been.
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10 Years Ago
It does have a sad road map feel to it. Glad you could appreciate it.
I read this summation of friendship as in the happiness of friendships, there are sadness. In their ups, there are down, in their so's, there are isn't so's. There has to be that intent of the mutuality and the desire of continuity. An excellent write.
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10 Years Ago
Sounds to me like an idealized friendship...perhaps the unfulfilled wishes behind this one. Thanks .. read moreSounds to me like an idealized friendship...perhaps the unfulfilled wishes behind this one. Thanks for sharing, Sami.
10 Years Ago
Yep. Idealized and hopefully sanitized at the end...Unfulfilled wishes live in the never land for so.. read moreYep. Idealized and hopefully sanitized at the end...Unfulfilled wishes live in the never land for some can be part of the romance land...Say that can't you see by the dawn early light when reality hits us with its might...Just babbling if that makes any sense...lol
You are welcome muchly...:)..............
Two questions if you will:
1) Does not unfulfilled desires come from placing high expectations.. read moreTwo questions if you will:
1) Does not unfulfilled desires come from placing high expectations and conditions of friendship( or any relationship)?
2) Does not unfulfilled desires come from a failure of one of the partners to fulfill or compliment the desires of the other?
And where does anger and jealousy too come into play in all of that?
Thank you in advance...
10 Years Ago
I feel like answering those questions could potentially lead to a dispute. I'd rather we stayed fri.. read moreI feel like answering those questions could potentially lead to a dispute. I'd rather we stayed friends. :) So, in a way, I think that somewhat answers your question.
10 Years Ago
OK. We are friends regardless. Take care...:)............
Easy logically answer to this one. Can be friends if act like friends. Cross a certain line. Need overtakes friendship. I have many woman friends. I know what lines to stay upon. A nice poem. Open the door to many questions. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote
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10 Years Ago
Yes, they have to both have self-control and want the friendship. Thanks for sharing, Coyote.