Ears That Don't Hear

Ears that don't hear.

Mouths gone mute.

Hearts a-hurting.

I talk to you

and my words bounce off the walls.

They never seep through.

And now I’m bleeding out.

Author's Note

Originally I had hearts a-bleeding in the first stanza, but I took that out after adding the second stanza. Didn't want to say bleeding twice...

Reviews

[Jack...]

Diana, I think we all know this feeling and if some didn't before, they do now.

Very cool my friend.

[Diana]

Thank you, Jack. Feeling very raw today, as you can see.

[Daffy]

yes, I can hear you. A lot said in a short and concise way. Well done, and said. Sounds like a woman talking to a man....ooops, sorry. Lol D

[Diana]

No, actually, but I can see where you're coming from. Thanks, Daffy.

[Sami Khalil]

A beautiful although a sad one. So much said in few words. Analogy is great...Bravo............

[Diana]

Thank you, Sami. Inspired by some sad things.

[Sami Khalil]

Good source indeed...You are welcome not sadly though...Happily...:).............

[Diana]

Ahh...but of course. :)

[Sami Khalil]

:).....................