Come Out and Play?

And me, I'll just keep dancing

to the waltz inside my head.

The world outside is long since dead.

And if you'll ask me to come outside and play,

I'll say "No, not today."

Author's Note

Captcha- apieces. Building a fantasy world...

Reviews

[MsJewel]

I love this creative little gem...
dance on my friend!

:) Julie

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Visions painted in a wonderous will, A make believe art I find so real. To images of awe to all I see, warm floating captured in a breeze.

[Diana]

Nice. Thank you.

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Welcome Diana:)

[Trace]

I know exactly what you mean
not today
tomorrow starts with a new dance card

I was posting a poem the other day and the captcha said: drivel
I deleted the poem

Huggs... Trace

[Diana]

Thank you, Trace. Drivel, ehh?

[Jack...]

What about tomorrow? Nicely penned Diana.

[Diana]

Thank you, Jack.

[annabellee]

What a great write. I can totally relate to that. I live in my own world, too.
well done :)

[Diana]

Thank you.

[annabellee]

you're most welcome :)

[Sami Khalil]

Wow. I love this. At least we are waltzing in the head...lol
A very nice poem...:)...............

[Diana]

Thank you, Sami. Yes, better to waltz in my head...

[Sami Khalil]

Hahaha...I understand...You are welcome...:).....................

[jacob erin-cilberto]

the way the world is today..i feel like this everyday...i will stay inside my head and inside my pen...

thank you very much for this write...

you caught me in this exact mood..and echoed the sentiments i am feeling.

jacob

[Diana]

Glad I'm not the only one. Thanks for stopping by, Jacob.