Feeling for a Pulse

And everywhere you go

the world is frozen,

blue-cold and covered in snow.

And icy patches lie 

beneath the tentative pavement.

And you, dear little soul,

are just feeling for a pulse.

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

I do agree. A lot of people are self absorbed and selfish so they feel cold and uncaring for they are all about themselves and what they can take and not give in love and warmth or even empathy. Some people are in total hibernation too to their surroundings and care less about the comfort of others. Your poems are wonderfully warm and not cold like the world ...:)...........

[Diana]

Thank you, I am so glad to hear my poetry "feels warm."

[Sami Khalil]

Yep. It does. You are welcome...:)..............

[MichaelsLyric.com]

The heart is frozen, only the soul is keeping up the vitals. Nicely said, this piece has style to it, meaning, it's lite, yet full of impact. Thank you for writing.

[Diana]

Thank you for reading.

[MichaelsLyric.com]

You are very welcome )

[icelandicblue]

It must be there somewhere... that indication that a small flame still flickers and hope waits in a frozen corner waiting to be freed. This is a great one Diana.

[Diana]

Thank you, but sometimes the world feels stone cold. Coming from you, icelandicblue, there has to be a touch of irony to your post...

[icelandicblue]

Ha, so true, I forget the frosty moniker I've donned. It's really based on my eyes...