Feeling for a Pulse

Feeling for a Pulse

A Poem by Diana

And everywhere you go
the world is frozen,
blue-cold and covered in snow.

And icy patches lie 
beneath the tentative pavement.

And you, dear little soul,
are just feeling for a pulse.

© 2013 Diana


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I do agree. A lot of people are self absorbed and selfish so they feel cold and uncaring for they are all about themselves and what they can take and not give in love and warmth or even empathy. Some people are in total hibernation too to their surroundings and care less about the comfort of others. Your poems are wonderfully warm and not cold like the world ...:)...........

Posted 10 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Diana

10 Years Ago

Thank you, I am so glad to hear my poetry "feels warm."
Sami Khalil

10 Years Ago

Yep. It does. You are welcome...:)..............



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wow...that intense . iv only read 2 of Ur poems and have a hard time taking them in.u write nice stuff and believe it or not u intice the reader . every time i read i read more than once over and over even though i understood it perfectly.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Diana

10 Years Ago

Glad you found my work enticing. Thanks for stopping by.
soulesswriter

10 Years Ago

haha no problem thanks 4 writing this:)
I feel like this is me on my down days. Well written.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Diana

10 Years Ago

Glad you could relate. Thank you, Trevor.
This sounds just like my morning.
cold grey icy
and then there's the weather outside.


Deep thought expressed here.

Trace

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Diana

10 Years Ago

Thank you, Trace.
Short and wonderful. Really liked this one.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Diana

10 Years Ago

Thank you, Pryde.
Even the coldest of hearts have a pulse if you look hard enough.

Very nice Diana...the world can be a very cold place at times...but friends can sure add a bit of warmth to the mix.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Diana

10 Years Ago

True story. Thank you, Jack.
the world is frozen because we make it so...if we had more warmth, we would melt the ice.

nicely expressed.

jacob

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Diana

10 Years Ago

Every I adds to the we. That's what "we" forget. Nice insight, Jacob.
Ah ! I feel this way so often, and winter has nothing to do with it. I will start worrying when I stop looking for a pulse. Excellent write. ~Jim

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Diana

10 Years Ago

Yes, I worked the seasons in mostly because I thought the imagery would be cool. True story... I s.. read more
Hi Di.

This one led me to write of a visit to Barnes and Noble. Why? Because it said something I recognized inside - behind my eyes - that spoke of many human conditions and my own perception of what you were thinking.

Thanks hon.
Chris


Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Diana

10 Years Ago

Glad I could help. Hope you're day is going tolerably well...
Chris

10 Years Ago

There is a bit of hope in the air... makes the days go ...nicer.
I do agree. A lot of people are self absorbed and selfish so they feel cold and uncaring for they are all about themselves and what they can take and not give in love and warmth or even empathy. Some people are in total hibernation too to their surroundings and care less about the comfort of others. Your poems are wonderfully warm and not cold like the world ...:)...........

Posted 10 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Diana

10 Years Ago

Thank you, I am so glad to hear my poetry "feels warm."
Sami Khalil

10 Years Ago

Yep. It does. You are welcome...:)..............

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